Here is my second mock up of the poteintial album cover. I refined the colour correction to softer lilacs to create more of a purple/pink haze and toned the album cover title so it was not as obtrusive to appeal to a female target audience in their late teens/early twenties. The album looks much cleaner and much more simple and to the point, what I am aiming for.

Also, through asking a range of people both boys and girls, between 17-19, and the general consensus was that this album cover was much more appealing because the colours are not loud and 'shouting' at you but calm and more grown up, although still portraying the stay young theme that I am aiming for.